Check for any possible plot holes or inconsistencies. Ensure that the elements of the plot logically connect and that the themes are consistent throughout. Make sure the characters have depth and their motivations are clear.
Conflict: The protagonist faces both external obstacles (antagonists, physical dangers) and internal conflicts (doubts, fears, personal history). There might be a moral dilemma or a choice between revealing truths and keeping some things buried.
Potential symbolism: The broken whispers as a metaphor for broken communication, lost histories, or unresolved past. The setting could reflect the protagonist's inner turmoil or the city's hidden secrets.
Also, need to mention the genre to attract the right audience. Maybe list some comparable authors or works to give a reference point. However, since it's a new title, using comparisons could help readers understand the style.